Monday, January 11, 2010

The Blues

She let out a long, aggravated sigh and whispered her fears into her lover's cold ear. The secrets fell into his grave, where the seeds of insecurity blossomed into a garden of soliloquy. "Forever is a long time to be alone."

9 comments:

  1. Brief but eloquent; slightly macabre, but effective.

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  2. At least you have an audience for your soliloquy! And forever is too long to be alone. So hop to it!

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  3. Aggravated sigh? Is that one of those "huh" sounds adolescent girls like to make where aggravated? Often accompanied by crossed arms, a pout and foot stomp? If so, the whispered fear was probably more like a whine, something like "why don't you pay me more attention, or take me out more, or devote your life to me, etc. etc. etc.

    Hounded the poor guy right into his grave.

    Just kidding Indy.

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  4. You just described me in a paragraph!!

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  5. Indy, you'd better get over to Simon's place and defend yourself. Your name's being taken in vain.

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